Reviews for Fabricated Son

[Soapbubble]

...Wow

This is the best I've heard on NG Audio Portal in... a long time. Seriously, wow.

When a piece like this comes along, I have a hard time writing a review, because all I can think of saying is that it sounds great and is awesome.

The melody is really catchy. In general the song is technical enough to sound interesting and still simple enough to be very entertaining to pretty much anyone. I liked the double vocals, whether it was overdubbing or two vocalists.

The drums were also pretty interesting, and varied, but they might have been a bit too loud, as opposed to guitars which were maybe a bit too low.

This track goes in my favourites, now.

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[PulseLane]

Spectacular

~Instrumental~
There's not one thing I dislike about the instrumental parts of this song. The flow is never broken by one little note off-beat (that I can notice) and that's not as easy to perform as many may think. The beat has a really nice feel to it; one that makes you makes you do stupid hand motions to the song (I hope its not just me :P). Well, there's not much else to say, so I'll just say that you did a really nice job here. 10/10

~Vocal~
Once again, you did a beautiful job here. I really like how you managed to switch between the speeds of the vocals without it feeling like a bump in the road; in other words in doesn't go off-balance with the rest of the song. The echo parts of the song also happened at, what seems to be, the perfect time. Pretty much everything that I said I liked about the instrumental can be said about the vocals as well. 10/10

~Volume Levels~
Ah, the part that's going to be a pain for me to say. This is the- let's not spoil the rest of the review. The instrumental sound goes a little too high, making the vocal levels a little bit hard to hear. I will admit that the only reason I understand the lyrics right now is because I went through the song while reading the lyrics two times in a row (yes, I'm listening to the song as I write this review). So, if you could fix this volume level problem in a future song you do it'll be even more magnificent than this song (providing everything else stays as amazing) However, I will admit it could be MUCH work so I'll be nice on your judging here. 6.5/10

~Lyrics~
Like I said before, the only reason I can even judge this part is because you were kind enough to put the lyrics. Alright, I think I've been extra-harsh on this little problem so let's continue with the lyrics. I love the lyrics of these, especially the chorus; along with the beat its definitely the best part of the song =D. This song is the kind to get stuck in your head for days and I know I'll be listening to this song for the next week or so *downloads*. 10/10

~Overall~
This is a spectacular song. Almost everything about this song is perfect. Now, of course this had some constructive criticism, but what song doesn't? Now, I believe that I must tell you why I gave you the "-"(s) points I did. I am giving you a 9 because while the song is excellent it could use a bit of work on the volume levels, and as much as I'd like to give this submission a perfect 10 I can't. So, please, enjoy your 9 and take everything I have stated into consideration. 9/10

~Extra~
I have another gripe with this submission, but as it has nothing to do with anything that should lower the score I have put it in this "extra" section. As stated earlier I liked the parts of the song with the echos, HOWEVER in the lyrics on-page you didn't put them there (them there). It makes it kind of hard to learn the song and sing along with it easily. Its not that big of a deal, but it is kind of annoying, and I'd thought I'd point it out. Anyways, great song *listens to song some more*. Also, please ignore any mistakes I may have made.

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sicjes responds:

WOW !!! Thanks for the great feedback, I worked harder on this song then I have on any before spending hours upon coutless hours tweeking and mixing etc. I allready bossted the vocals a bit in this mix but I see how they could be a bit louder (This is the first of my songs that I seriously buckled down and tried to do some singing/vocals so Im still a little shy, but I will remix the final mix with wich be on my homemade album with the vocals a touch louder.
Other then that, you made my day, I hope my song can now live in your head and not just mine.

The next songs coming out of my little project will equally blow you away, Cant wait to share them with everyone. But step one is complete, Fabricated Son now exists beyond my Harddrive and imagination.

Thanks again for the best review possible.
Jesse

[mr-vincent]

NIce song at all

This is a good song, but you need a little something to improve it...

Song quality: 6
Guitar tuning: 5
Voice: 9

Ti improve quality, you should improve drum recording, sound is peaking hmm like.... (volume is to high).

You should rise up the master volume, it's hard to hear the song...

Anyway, great work, keep it rock !

[nunyabizness]

Nice song

Like has been said before, the levels are a bit low and the progression is a bit slow, but it is a solid song. Practice with some compression on your vocals and guitars the drums are overpowering yet the guitars blend with the vocals a lot...try tweaking on the mastering a little more, but still a good song

[Blakant]

cool

awesome job! :)