Reviews for Fabricated Son

[Pure-Metal-UTA]

I really like this song!

BUT like the guy below me said, the vocal volume is really low, so it's hard to make out the lyrics just by listening to it.
Nonetheless, the lyrics are really good.
Instrumentation is good, EQing seems good except for the vocals.
One suggestion, I don't know if you do this, but perhaps try singing at the top of your lungs, this allows for better flow of the lyrics, and perhaps by doing this you won't need to turn up the volume of the vocals.
Great song though! I 5'd this earlier, so I can't five it again.

[rorychally]

great

A very modern slow metal sound you have. The vocals sounded good and the effects were pretty cool. The chorus was hooky. The lyrical theme seems simple yet original and the lyrics themselves are cryptic and poetic. The instrumental is there and better than most, especially the guitar.I think the guitar could have been more involved, in terms of a lead section though to get my 10. I love the quality of sound generally and the song as a whole is great. What program do you use to come up with this finished product of a song and how do you record the guitar?

[TheUprising1]

Nice one.

Very epic intro, and it only gets better after that - only the chorus is a bit weak, sadly, it's probably caused by the vocal melody - I'd overthink parts of it, sound a bit cheesy, especially about the end of the chorus.
Anyways, good riffs and beats, good vocals, though a bit hard to understand.
You'd really need a better mix here, it would be so much better. xD

What you should try is putting compression on each track (fit to the instruments) and then another compressor on the master track. That gives the mix alot of power and is actually done by alot of famous audio engineers (including my teacher, lol). Just try it, in case you use cubase, the "dance master" preset for the regular compressor works well.

Rated full 5 anyways, it is great after all. ^^

- The Uprising