Reviews for Newground$ Tutorial

[GrimSilverFire]

Needs improving.

The music gets annoying after A few minutes so it could of done with A mute button.The cool links needs some clickable boxes around them so you don't have to click on the actual letters to open the links. A few suggestions for the Dictionary: FTW (For the Win) WTF (What the Fuck) TBH (Too Be Honest). Apart from the cool links and the Dictionary you can find most of this in the FAQ's.
I gave A four for humour because of what you said in the Batting average "the rest are probably beginners or who just suck" It made me laugh.

Overall:Needs some Improving and more Original content.

~The Review Request Club~

HomerDough responds:

I made anothe version that had a mute button and a WHOLE LOT of links to proiles. Review that next plz and thanks for the review

[Zero-X]

Great for newcomers

Liked it, it would be very informative for a newcomer. Would be nice to put a link to it on the where is /how to? forum.

HomerDough responds:

thanks and I did

[Omgee]

Not bad, but...

This is helpful, but probably unnecessary. It's unlikely that new folks will see this (or any of the other flashes that have been made that are like this one). Good thought, though.

It annoyed me that the music reset every time I went back to the main menu -- and that a click back to the main menu was required for each section. It would've been cool if the music could've kept going continuously through the flash, and if the various sections could have been clicked through directly instead of requiring me to start over for each section.

Like I said, good try.

HomerDough responds:

... if the various sections could have been clicked through directly instead of requiring me to start over for each section

you mean like a go to next subject button?

[Jovatov]

Not that good

This is all explained in the Help / FAQ section of Newgrounds, only with a better look. The music starting over when going back to the menu was annoying too. The buttons in the statistics and cool links sections were hard to click.
The text wasn't very organised the background just black. This needs more, much more.

HomerDough responds:

I'll try to fix all those in the next version. Thanks for your advice

[Hemlok]

It wasn't very good.

This tutorial was ok. The style of this flash was alright but then again, can't the people that view this just read the FAQ? The music was pretty good too. As fare as the tutorial goes and what it contained you did provide good information. I guess beginners here at Newgrounds need to look at something like this. You did an alright job on this, keep it up!

HomerDough responds:

It is a flash . Why read instead of watch/

Thanks though