Enjoyable
That was actually pretty good, despite for the end bit where the sound bits came in too late. Try and match it more. Also, the blood looked kind of gay. But otherwise, good job!
Enjoyable
That was actually pretty good, despite for the end bit where the sound bits came in too late. Try and match it more. Also, the blood looked kind of gay. But otherwise, good job!
Well the idea was good but...
...ur graphics and sounds dont work really well. Like the fighting scene looked foolish and those sounds got little lag. Anyway, idea was cool and few jokes were good. Now just waiting for next episode.
Great Art, Cheesy everything else
Your art style is super hot. I really like it. And the animation is pretty good. But your writing needs work. Seriously. Maybe I'm overly critical because I am a writer. But the words "abominably cliche" came to mind while watching it. If you just wanted an action sequence, just make it an action sequence. You'll get better reviews. But honestly, a cheesy, hastily thrown-together storyline is worse than none at all.
The sound could also use some work. Better selection is a good idea, instead of just taking popular music you like that has a dark sound to it. Also, the volume seemed to jump in places, or was too loud. The voice acting could also use work. The quality was pretty good but the voices were too similar (same person?). Pace and spacing of words was poor as well. Another case of "None > Bad".
Basically, you're working on a very strong foundation (the actual animation). The peripherals need some work if you want to be a pro. I know a sound highly critical but hopefully you'll see it as constructive. I think you got tons of talent and I look forward to future works. =)
Nice...
A good piece of art,characters were c00l,and etc...but if I were YOU,I would have sticked to the main characters outfit,like it was in the first episode.Music was great,Again and the character voices were nice,but they didn't match to the animation.You made this part longer which was very good improve,as the 1st episode was very short.But it clearly had it's price... So what can I say anymore...Keep up the good work.
very very good! ^.^
this was a very interesting movie! i hope to see more installments soon. the fight scene was pretty cool. ummmm..... yuo need to try to make the music flow mor e instead of it just popping up loud and proud. it was very good and your characters are very unique! ^.^
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