Reviews for Bleed: Vampire Awakening2

[QuixoticCreator]

Overall Nice

Overall nice job. Unlike what some other's are saying the inconsistent styles didn't bother me so much. I don't think everything should look like a generic TV middleschooler action cartoon, however it is clear that the inconsistencies are unintentional. Perhaps if you really focused on how you want each character/scene to look and amplified those aspects of it. I liked the jokes, especially the "vampires have extra senses" line the first time. The dialog between the male characters was terrible though. The blue guy made me laugh (which I assume wasn't you're intension). Overall good. Work on colors, values (brightness), dialog (writen and read). Great Job, hope to see more.

[highcrusader]

Needs improvement, but WOW.

Thankyou for that, my friend. Excellent animations, and your drawings were amazing. The voice acting was very well done for a flash movie, aaaaaand well, the drawings were (again) amazing. The few things I can ask you to work on are your sense of timing, and the effort put into subtitles. If you're going to do them, do them right. Match them completely with what your voice actors are saying. Also, during the fight scenes (I know its tough; I have a lot of respect for you) try and..... well, make things flow better. If a strong enemy says "I'm through playing with you" and dies 3 seconds later, its a wee bit cheezy. Make the action match with the text, man. Other than that, I look forward to your next flash. Keep it up.

[YurikoMasaki]

Stablize your art work.

Compared to the first work, your main charecter's appearance vastly changed. Aditude is also different. Also, from scene to scene the characters' appearences were not compleatly the same. Sorry, criticising this from an artist's perspective. Pick one look and stick with it. In the fight scenes, try putting in some shading. This does wonders for movement.

[Aspire505]

Extremely Average at Best

I was expecting much better after what beautiful graphics and voice, and characters I witnessed in the first episode. Also if I remember correctly at the end of the first they were standing outside, near some sort of gate. Also, since when was the main character so stupid and attempting to be funny? He seemed calm almost heartless in the first episode. Also, when one character would hit the other in the fighting scenes really quickly it looked as if the one receiving the blow was at a standstill. IN short this animation was extremely sketchy, slow it down next time, and dont sacrifice intelligent vocab and dialogue for attempts at being witty, because 99.9% times (when you arent doing a comedy) it will not work, and it will end up making you and your work look cheesy.

[Fallout-Force]

I liked the animation of the first one more

I really liked both of them just the first one seemd more finished, the diologue scenes seemed as if they were missing something. and some of the animations you sacrficed quailty for animation speed, I have seen how well it is done but the quality of the chearacters drops when they are in any excessive action scene.