Meh...
It's not a bad start but there are so many flaws. I couldn't stand the sound. The recording was bad. You need to work on it. The fights were kinda boring until some of the jokes. It's not bad at all, but it could be so much better.
Reviews for "DevilSlayer"
BLACK CHARACTERS!!!
FINALLY. A good flash featuring black characters. Theres only like one other good 1 but the rest are jus ghetto trash.
Now on to the movie, I just really have to say the writing was great.
We really have to talk on AIM so I can learn more on how you animate.
I can't wait to see your next flash.
( oh yea, that boondocks joke was funny too. I dont think much people on the site is going to catch the perm part. )
JazLyte responds:
HEHE, I remember you, and what you were sayin about Ice Sonic; how there aint enough black animators. this is why I made this movie, there aint enough Detroit on this site!
Glad u enjoyed it. Keep your eyes peeled, next one's out this summer!
Sauce
This was by far the best Flash I have looked at tonight. Your artstyle was good, can use some improving, but it was really good compared to some of the stuff I've seen. Your voices where scratch, that is what made me hesitate on giving you a perfect 10. I liked your story, and your main menu as well. I hope to see more from you soon.
JazLyte responds:
Thanx, you will cuz
shabby but a cool shabby
i like the vioces an the jokes an the action maybe a little less scratchy voices tho it upsets the flash but other than it was pretty good i deffniately hope to see your talents again ur pretty good well check ya lata
ugh
Like the graphic style alot but the motion just ruins the entire animation. The movement just fucking sucked for the most part. Story was ok until you added the even more retarded "cheetos" deal? c'mon. It was goin fine until u added that shitty-ass play on humor. Weak on that.
Voices...eh, ok, but not preferable in my personal taste. Music....could be better, but the quality wasn't great either.
allinall, you need more work. But points to your drawing style, wasn't all that great but it was better than alot i've seen. Although i feel like I've seen that style somewhere else.
JazLyte responds:
hey, I cant compromise my artistic integrity on the cheeto thing, sorry. But thanx 4 the review