I really like the story but...
The voice quality was a real turn off. I'm not saying your voices are bad but the constant pops and fuzzy sounding stuff is really preventing me from giving this a higher rating. Also, the way when things died how their heads just kinda, disappeared clean off was a little weird to me.
Otherwise, Characters design was great, and personalities seem to fit the way they act. I see a lot of things were a character will act all tuff and then 2 minutes later will act all girly so this part is nice.
So if you work on Sound Quality I'm sure this would be A LOT more enjoyable.
3/5