The animation
The animation was well... cruddy. The scene repeated constantly and the characters especially the kid were well looked like pieces of cardboard in a continus motion. The artwork i admit was good but the actual animation was cruddy. Plus the music had points where it was no longer heard and basicly left me reading a story that moved at a slow clip.
And the music was kinda annoying.
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well, that video quickly bored me, the music was repetitive and annoying, the people showed like 2 facial expressions from emotions (happy and normal- even when sad they looked happy) and this story was drawn out way to long. up your animations a little and change the songs around instead of looping them. the storyline was great though.
Lousy
I'm sorry, but you simply must learn better English. Some of those sentences were so awkwardly composed that they made me feel physically uncomfortable. Read some English novels, or else write in your own native tongue (I hope to God English isn't your primary language)
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Boring... The crap animation ruined it for me. And it was too obvious what was gonna happen. And the music was annoying. Now I'm guessing a bunch of people will start flaming me.
..... pretty lame
now im not complaining about there being no violence or anything but it was kind of boring i mean that kids kinda lucky compared to most others like when katrina hit or the tsunami struck why do a flash about some chinese kid being dissapointed??? i think you should make some better graphics or choose a decent song that u can actually get the message