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Reviews for "The Promise of Home"

Not bad.

I liked that the beginning tied in with the end. It was definitely well thought out. My favorite part of the animation was when the child was reflecting, you blended the flashbacks well when he was with his mother in the valley. It definitely stayed linear, and was something that is relatively rare at newgrounds.

I think the biggest problem was that it was very hard not to sit here and day dream. After awhile it became tiresome just to read. I would definitely suggest using voices if you are capable. It isn't really enjoyable to be forced to read and try to watch it at the same time, and make sure that you can read it at a fast enough pace to keep up with the story and comprehend it. Secondly, you should have used a different song the second time around, especially since when you went into silence it seemed like it was going into the conclusion. At the end, it makes the viewer second guess their self because there is a fear that maybe that song would start again and it wasn't the end.

Overall it was good, but I think it just needs some polishing and then it would be excellent.

perfect

Love the blend of the story and the music........ it actually takes skill to create that type of flash. (not that you don't need skill for others, but hey)

Superb movie

This actually brought tears to my eyes. Everything in this movie was excellent! It's good to see an artist with an actual story line. This is very exquisitely done. Awesome work! Hope to see more in the future.

beautiful

I have seen your previous works and I admire your creativity and the emotion that each film conveys. This one in particular is very moving and the song is enchanting.

The story..

and the graphics are good..
the music is nice BUT try to get a more fluent connection to the next loop of the music.. the pause seems not to be your idea in the story concept.. possibly get 2 or three music with other themes to make the mood is like the mood of the persons in the story

but i think you make good steps in the right direction

sincerly Drac