It's ok...
A pretty good depressed song. That's some fine guitar playing you have there (better than me), even though you had a little screw up somewhere in the song. I'm not totally crazy about lyrics, but it should be made a little longer. If it's possible, make the lyrics longer and change the variety of them (that way you don't have to keep singing the same chorus over and over again). Overall this is a nice piece, and I am expecting for the professional version to come out.
Any idea when the CD is coming out?
3/5 & 7/10