Interesting
I loved the style and your drawing skills! However, I thought that the story itself was quite weak. Overall I liked it.
Reviews for "two brothers"
Good piece, great musical selection for it.
Although this is a bit brief and, therefore, lacking in the kind of development necessary to support the intended weight and drama, the music does a lot of the work that might have been done with plot events or narration. It is only because of this selection that I was able to see what I believe to be the emotional charge behind the style.
Otherwise I would have taken it for just another sketch fighter. Well, actually, the intermittent shots of the flower kind of set it apart, too, but they are far less important in setting the mood. The music would have had almost the same effect without the flower, but the flower would have been confusing without the music.
Also, I appreciated the choice of switching between the wooden model style and the closeup facial sketch style, but the details of the victor's face felt incosistent with the more realistic sketches of everything else. Is he supposed to be some sort of demon, or just a man?
With these criticisms noted, I still would like to say that I enjoyed piece and was impressed by the skill and talent that went into it.
nice
very nice and smooth animation, the story was a little wry and ultimatly a little short, but very nice work...
very impressive
i loved it. the style is great.
the only place there COULD be improvement is the facial exressions maybe you'd like to to make them more in tune with the mood.
great Job
Great style.
I loved your style to this flash! It was so original and it's something I would like to see a lot more of on Newgrounds. The graphics were great! I loved how you just used sketches of the characters. It was simple. Though the black and white style fit this flash color would have been nice. I would have also liked to see some backgrounds. Some mountains would have made it look really good. Like I said before great style to this flash! I was really into the whole story thing going on with a little part of the story and then you acted the part of the story with animation. I gave you an eight for sound because the music was a perfect fit for this flash. I liked the action scenes going on but I wish there was a lot more of them! A little more action scenes and blood spray wouldn't have hurt. Great job makeing this flash and like I said a million times before I love your style! The only thing I could ask for improvement wise is make backgrounds, add some color, and of course make it longer! Although I said a lot of things need improvement this was still a very good flash! I can see why this got Daily Feature! Once again great job!