fuckin weird man...
Strange but really good, FbF bold move but turned out really well. keep it up but i do think you should change 1 thing, the fact that it has the "silent movie effect" is alright but i personally dont like it, there should have been a bit more action, but as u said, its for practice so you deserved #1 of the day...
MC_Hippy AKA RobVayne