Not impressed
I thought the story line was kind of lame, and so was the song. You have a long way to go before you'll be any good. Keep trying.
Reviews for "two brothers"
He forgot to mention a couple things...
Besides his epic, well thought out, non-cliche story line, the entire feel of the 'movie' was inspired ( I'd go as far as to say stolen ), by Jeffrey Liu ( Thirstyforchicken ) , who submitted a movie called 'Mask' back in early 2005. You only need half of a brain to see that several animation segments were copied from TFC's animation ( which can be found here: newgrounds . com/portal/view/239365 | hate to link to something, but it is kind of necessary ). So, check it out. It's more than obvious. What annoys me is that the kid actually lies about it. All he needs to do is give him credit.
Its pretty.
The graphics where well done, and the art style where nice to, although you can tell that one of the brothers don't have a face, but the surronding art makes it 'forgivable' I personally did not like the story, the text didn't bore me, I just did not like it. I am not placing any rank of reccomendations, for I feel kinda bieist on this one.
Dude...wtf
I have to say i was tremendously disappointed. I was expecting the lack of action and humor to be offset by some enlightening ending about the horrors of war or something. There isnt a point. Some may argue that many an entry lack a point, but at least those are funny or (dare i say) LEAST least colored somewhat and have more violence. Two brothers...one dies and the other one takes all the family shinys...the end. And the girl in the begining didnt come into play at all either come to think of it. I'm going to say try harder next time.
evolart responds:
Well thanks for the review. I must be bad at drawing cause there is no girl in there. It was one of the brothers. Thats my bad prob not yours. Well my "secret point is" greed takes all
"Wow"... in a bad way
That Blew chunks. Get some original ideas. WTF is this doin on the frountpage... Im now planning on sueing you for wasting my time.