ohh
this is some good stuff you have going on
ohh
this is some good stuff you have going on
Nice
It made me laugh a bit at the end. Good job drawing everything yourself people can appriciate that, even though the drawings weren't all great, the story itself and the voice/subtitles along with it made up more than enough for it. Overall 8.
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my favourite part was : was i on crack lol
good rhyme ( sory if i have grammer mistakes )
wicked
except u lost sight of ur style with using the term "was i on crack" wrong type of lexis's for the rest of the piece apart from that tho wicked
nice rhyming
hey, that was a really cool poem, and good hand-drawn animation! I really liked this.