pretty neat
if you thought up that story on your own thats pretty good, the animation really sets the mood too.
Reviews for "I Was Almost Murdered"
Matt-Merrill responds:
My friend actually wrote the story like way back in 7th grade. I liked it a lot so I had him send it to me. I then rewrote it to be a rhyming poem.
Ah, a paper flash...
This was good, except you should have made your voice(im assuming that's you voice) deeper, or at least British, which is why I only gave you 5 for sound... Sorry, but other than that it wasw pretty good!
Matt-Merrill responds:
Heh, it was actually a friend of mine who was doing the voices. I originally had him do them pretty deep, but after I rendered them in Flash they were almost impossible to understand. So I had to have him do them not quite as deep.
and I think british accents are overated...
Very good
Very good indeed. The animation was excellent to show the plot of the story. It was a very good poem on its own as well! I think I'll be looking forward to seeing other entries like this.
not bad
i liked the lyrics and i liked that it was in black and white, it gave a better affect
Not bad... didn't much care for the ending.
I loved the poem, I liked the animation style, and I liked the animation in general up until the very end. WTF was with the dog? It was very anticlimactic and cliched. Not terrible, I guess, but I was really expecting better after the good build-up earlier in the animation. You have a good start, I'd just suggest rethinking your ending. The end is most of what cost you on your overall score.
Matt-Merrill responds:
yeah, I promise that is the only time I will do an ending like that. This was just kinda a short, for-fun flash. My next movie I promise will go much deeper.