Very nice
I really like the style, the sound was done well, but the one thing I would work on is the subtitles. If you could manage to incorporate them more into the animation - like have them appear in various areas of the screen as they are read - it would add to the atmosphere, and also avoid having that ugly box at the bottom of the stage.
Ah, that is a good idea... I will take that into consideration in the future. At my website I also have a nonsubtitle version of the video.
That was pretty cool
I like how it was all handdrawn and then animated, the poem was also quite good, Kudos d(n_n)
Very well done
Very imaginative and cool. The poem was fantastic except for a few parts where the rhythm of the verse was off. Normally I don't like other people's poetry, but this was quite clever. All in all, great job.
haha, and for the most part I usually suck at poetry, so that is a good compliment for me :)
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this is some good stuff you have going on
Nice Style, Nice Story
It was very cool. Especialy the whole style. I would like to see an alternative ending where he kills his dog. lol