Hey.. pretty cool!
The only complaint I have is that the speaker isn't very poetic. It was kind of read a little bit to fast.. and there wasn't really any emotion. I mean kudos for it not being monotone.. but I think it could have been a lil bit more suspenseful with some chilling music and with the narrator being more dramatic. Other than that, this was awesome! (by the way, Im not trying to offend you and if I did, I appologize)
nah, you're right. I realized after I had it mostly put together that the lines were spoken a little too quickly and kinda weak on emotion. the only problem was I had already done most of the movie by then, and I reeally didn't want to redo the voices and then redo the timings on every scene. But yeah, all these little mistakes, in the future I'll try and catch them before I get too far!
Very Nice
That was great. I love the pencil and paper style. I felt like a was reading something by Poe lol. Anyways, keep it up, I love to see something new every once in a while.
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my favourite part was : was i on crack lol
good rhyme ( sory if i have grammer mistakes )
Nice
It made me laugh a bit at the end. Good job drawing everything yourself people can appriciate that, even though the drawings weren't all great, the story itself and the voice/subtitles along with it made up more than enough for it. Overall 8.
ALL 10
nice everything....story great...ending hahaha..... gave a 5 sry wasnt logged in so wasnt worth as much but this should make it to the weekly top 20