Keep working, I liked it!
Wow, you've got a lot of Action Script (AS) in this game. Polish up the code, try to make functions so that your game will run shorter.
Also, add a load bar if moving between levels is going to take a long time.
I definitely think the world could use a FF flash game. This is the most complicated AS I have seen in some time here.
P.S. Most NG reviewers have never written more than 10 lines of AS, so their criticism should not affect you.