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[WinTang]

Needs work

I protected this, but when it gets through, I think you should edit some things, or at least improve in a 3rd part:
- The sound is indeed crappy. Way too much bass, it sounds very hollow and distorted. I think the whole thing might need a different song, without vocals. This takes away the focus and besides, I fucking hate it :)
- The screen is blank several times, that really slows things down. Link the parts together and maybe have more "line evolutions" going on at the same time, that would really increase the replayability. Work to a climax of some kind. Way more than this will not be too much.

Good luck!

Legend responds:

Why do you hate the song? Oh well, thanks for the reveiw. I left some parts blank so it wouldn't get so repetative, which I failed at.

[ramagi]

Now this is what I was talking about

Funny I read what you said, but I think you did improve with this submission.
Well you included more lines with this one which is good, and you actualyl created things with them that did various things, which made it more interesting.
I know you said the replay button doesn't work you could fix it. :)
I think you could do a good FBF.
You made some good improvements with this.

Legend responds:

Thanks for the reveiw. I thought that I should include more so it wouldn't get so repetative. If you are going to see my third one, be warned, its pretty repetative of the first two, and alot of people are saying its the worst. Thanks for the compliments.

[Murray]

Quite good

This flash was a little better than the first one. Again, lots of lines, but that's what I usually see on a FBF flash anyway. Still, there were drawings of several things that were good. Nice animation in this flash as well with the FBF animation. :) The sound, the music didn't me too much, but at least the music was at a reasonable quality to give the filesize of the flash quite big, but not too big. Nice work.

-Bahamut

Legend responds:

Thanks again for the reveiw, I'm glad it interested you in some parts. My last 10 reveiws have all been from elite guard members, hehe, except the one from ramagi. The third one isn't as good though.

[iLLest-Sekell]

Cool

That was pretty cool. Good work.

Legend responds:

thanks, glad you like it.

[Freelance-Magician]

Another cool FBF

~The good~

The FBF was pretty nice, some cool effacts in this made it very pleasuurable for the eyes. The music was also upbeat and catchy, and the linees moved with the music during most parts.

~The bad~

A lot of the same problems that occured in the otther one I reviewed, it ends way too suddenly and the backgrounds are pretty dull. You almostt finishedd the song, you should've just let it go for a little bit and just finish it. Another major problem I found was that if you pressed the REPLAY button, it would just lead you to a green screen that doesn't load for quite a long time.

Overall, a decent FBF, can't say it was one of your best, but it was still pretty darn good. I hope this review was helpful!

3/5
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