Great flash, but.....
The sound was horrible. I would have given you a 9 or 10 if not for the sound. The animation was good, the mysterious story had me reeled in, but the sound, Oh God the sound. Fix that one issue and you will have a great flash.
Reviews for "Black Knights Episode 1"
Superb artwork, but...
For such a superb animation, I'm surprised you didn't take the time to check your spelling on the subtitles and to review your piece and notice that the voices were unintelligible for most of the movie. Too quiet, or too drowned out by the other noises/music.
Your artwork was fantastic, but on your next submission you may want to look into another voice actor so that they aren't all the same voice.. and check over your work! If you can't hear what they're saying, neither can we. And nothing makes a submission look more amateurish than spelling mistakes. Also.. in one part you had a guy say "Yes, lord?" but your subtitle was like "YES.... Lord?!?". Don't overdo it.
A six
It looked great, the story show promise, but if you don't do some better sound editing it will really drag down the over all experiance. I'd suggest investing in a better microphone, and a decent sound editing program. Other than that it was great.
Its okay...
Graphics were good and so was the violence... but the voices were to quiet or to soft...
that's not what we do!
us black knights eat people....... and steal tv's and xbox's....and porn but raiding castles we dont do! good job! if you havent noticed i havent takin my meds!