Good movie, but keep training your voice
I liked the art, as well as the style of animation. The story so far looks good, and I think this will be a good series. However, the voice acting left things... desirable. Your voice is good, but you sounded bored. Movies like this need good dialouge, and even if what the characters say is good, it needs to be backed with good voices. I would suggest A)getting other people to do acting other than yourself (different people should have different voices, right?) and B)just apply yourself more when you're doing voices. Sound counts for a lot!