As others have said, fix the sound
This has huge potential, but the sound effects really crippled it. Specifically voices, they were far too quiet and most of the time couldn't be understood. The music was very good as were most of the other sound effects.
The darkness of the scene fit perfectly, adding to the mystery of what's going on. This did a great job of drawing me in, I can't wait for more. Fix the voices and this series will be a huge hit.
Nice.
This certainly was a nice entry and the animation wasn't that bad. The story has great potential, and the music choice was nice. However, the voices need to be callibrated more, so they can actually be heard over the music and all those other interfering things. But this can be really good once you get the voices down.
Could barely hear it
The opening scene reminded me of the first battle on FFT. An ok submission, But the sound was horrible.
To the glory of Loklain!
Wow, I must say...that was pretty good! A lot of things dragged it down, though. The animation needs work. There are more than two frames in a galloping horse. The art is very good but...hmmm. How do I say this? It's OBVIOUS that you have style, but your style needs refining. It's quite sketchy, and the proportions are off. I'd like to see more! This should prove to be quite good! Keep practicing, dude!
Good storyline, however...
Too much of the idea of this episode, not the storyline, was from Vampire Hunter D: Bloodlust. I mean the horses, the bg music, the arrow scene, and the green orb of power were too obvious of adaptions. The intro/outro music I did notice from Dynasty Warriors ending theme, didn't fit at all. I mean there all knights and their isn't a single samurai or oriental feel to it.
As far as the flash goes, I like the feel to the story, but the visiuals were a lil too dark, and the voice acting wasn't the best, but when this is your first chapter that leaves a lot of room to improve. Make sure you change your sound quality output to 44KHz too.
Just make sure that if you use other resources in your flash films, give them credit for inspiring you and so that you never get sued.
Nice work.