Good but...
Graphic supposed to be 10 but minus 1 because of the words... Fix it will ya... Other wise, it's good...
Reviews for "Tears of Red"
immortaltechnique responds:
thanks for tha honesty and the great score
i'll see wat i can do bout it
thanks
Nice
That was prety cool. He He I find it funny how everyone is callin ya a liar cuz they think its your first flash but REALLY its "-this is my first ((proper)) flash so go eazy on me k .. haha" If im thinking correctly this isnt your first its more like a First GOOD one or sumthin. Anyway good job on your first.... thing-a-ma-jig.
immortaltechnique responds:
hahah thanks :D
as i said below .. yeah itz my first PROPER .. flash and i've read tutorials n tried frame by frame effects out .. but nothing with a story line .. i learnt how to tween doin this flash ;D hahah
thanks for the review
Very nice
The music was very good. There were a few places where I thought there should be a bit less of it, but that aspect was nice overall. It was a pretty touching animation. At one point, towards the end when he once again remembered about meeting when the last leaf falls, I though he might commit suicide. Then, of course, he said, "You'll never be forgotten," and I had a bit of a "whew!" moment. The art was pretty good for most of it. Some of the art during the motions/movements was a bit off, but still awesome for your first time.
A small note - the guy who died, the one with the spiky blond hair - he really reminded me of some Dragonball Z characters (maybe SSJ Trunks?). I know that a lot of cartoons/animes must have characters with similar hairstyles, but that's the one I remembered, I suppose.
Anyway... overall, it was very nicely done!
immortaltechnique responds:
yeah someone else said that to me!! haha
but basically i just wanted two different characters with two oposite hairstyles that was distinguishable .. and wasn't really hard to draw??
i find that spikyhair is the best to draw
haha
well tahnks for the review and the score :D
Bull!!!!
I dont believe that this is your first flash. Its amazing! You did a real great job! Hell, I feel like crying right now. Thats how well made it was. Your skills can only improve, so Im looking foward to more.
immortaltechnique responds:
why thank u :D
but ... sooner or later u people r gona hav to believe me hahaha
dammit now i gotta make my second flash better lol
take it ez n thanks
LIAR!!!!
I saw the very first image of this and i was like "This guy is a fucking liar" But thats a great thing in the case! I was amazed at that first image, and then i read that its your first flash. I was honestly like WTF! anyways in my review i will explain each aspect briefly, Great Flash Deserve Great Reviews.
The graphics were too good to be in first flash. You must have put effort into each little thing about graphics. From detail in the environments to smooth animation, this had both of those and more. The drawings were sweet, and again i was aamzed at how good they were for a first. The detail was great, and not excessive and i liked how everything was grey,black and white, except the leaves and blood. So great animating style. Your overall style was great, a big thanks should go from you to Rob, who did a fantastic job with the story. But your animating was great, and the feel was as well. The way you presented the idea was awesome. The sound was also really good, i know it was meant not to have any sound effects, and it set the mood having done it that way but without sound effects its hard for me to give higher sound points. Anyways the music was great.
Overall i still cant believe this is your first. Thats just amazing and think of the things youll be doing in the future! So many possibilities! Anyways leave a response if you can, and im already anticipating your next submission. 4/5
immortaltechnique responds:
hey!!!!!!
well this is my first proper flash .. meaning i had experimented with it before ... 3 times?? they were all frame by frames .. and all went for about 5 seconds each?? not worth putting on newgrounds hehe (one of them was a ball moving from side to side.... GREAT!!)
but yeah ... its not my first time drawing on computer eitehr?? hehe so that probably helped out a bit :D
thanks for the review