oohh.. cool
Very impressive for your first proper flash... I really liked it. The animation was good, the drawings were good, but the story has been done a few times. I did enjoy it though. It is really good!
Reviews for "Tears of Red"
immortaltechnique responds:
thanks .. really?? yeah .. i guess the story line was a bit predictable. .. but it was jst mainly a learning experience for me ..
thanks for the score :D
Bitchin'
There was a typo or two, sometimes the text went out of the picture, and sometimes the animation wasn't flawless, but it was a very touching flash. An excellent piece of work, despite the little mistakes. It was the best new submission I've ever seen. I gave you a five, pal, keep up the good work.
immortaltechnique responds:
haha THANKS ... yeah .. sorry bout everythign to do with the text ... itz my newbie attempts at trying to be fancy LOL
i liked it
really epic story man good job love the way u did the red and black together,u get a 5 of 5
immortaltechnique responds:
ooo someone noticed .. thanks :D and hell yeah thanks for the 10
Niiiice.
You kind of stole those "text boxes" from Lilium but the movie and story was so good that I didn't mind blowing the whistle.
immortaltechnique responds:
heheh thank u :) .. i said earlier that it was inspired by lilium ..
i dont nkow how to edit my authors comments tho
Good stuff
For a first flash, that was quite awesome. I really have only one complaint as far as the animation goes, and that was that several times, when you centered the words over a characters head, they would scroll slightly off the screen. This looked quite shabby, but other then that, it was really good.
immortaltechnique responds:
thanks .. yeah .. im still a bit of a newbie at finalizing everything .. hopefully i kan send things to someone and they kan finalize everything for me . koz im hopeless at it ..
but other than the text problem im glad u found it good :)
katch