Not bad at all
I think this was pretty good.But i want to know what insipred you to do this animation. please respond.
But all you really need to work on is graphics and more attention to detail like when he walks and stuff, you know.Anyays overall very good. I can see you have some raw talent so keep trying. and please respond back i still wanna know what insipired you to make this.
What inspired me? I guess I was feeling down and I started to draw something that would make me sad. I stopped multiple times over the weeks as I was making this and changed things, but it is still weird to watch because the flash doesn't seem like something I would do. It may not seem like it but the flash was just random thoughts put together in a story.
Not too shabby
For a person just getting used to making these, you did a very good job. The story was pretty understandable, and it was overall good, so u get a 8, Good job!
DON'T CRY EMO BOY!!!
it was a pretty good movie all told, you're doing pretty well with the animation; keep working at it.
keep your chin up.
nobody likes a sobbing emo boy. not even sobbing emo girls.
Thanks! Believe it or not, I am not emo...however I am beginning to think that flash might be an outlet for me. This movie is still weird to watch for me because I dont know where it came from.
BAM!
Woah, that gunshot scared me.. even though I was expecting it.
Story line was good, but graphics were mediocre. Keep working on it.
Music, however, was a good fit. Liked it alot. =)
It was weird...The music clip was cut off...but as I gradually made the movie longer the cut seemed to fit no matter where I put it. I guess its just a good song for stuff like this! Thx for review!
Good for the most part
I liked it. The graphics could be worked on some and the scribbles of writing at the beginning hurt my eyes, but for the most part it was good. Keep at it, its not bad just needs to be worked on. *i'm starting on my flash skills this summer, my friend/newgrounds are going to help me make a few subissions.
Thanks! It took me a few months to get this far so when you get started keep at it!