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Akwardly humorous. The last part made me . . . think . . . about windows. . . Yay.
Reviews for "Spaced Out! (Pilot)"
grim-studios responds:
Made you... think... about windows? Huh. :)
Dull
That was um...dull. The signs weren't funny either if that's what you were going for. I gave you a 1 in humor out of pity, hope you like it.
grim-studios responds:
I cry for you. The signs weren't the only thing in there... oh well. Maybe you'll like the rest of the series a little more. :P
Hmm?
Hey dude, you need to chill out on the people who don't all give you positive reviews. Learn to take criticism constructively. For your first flash, this isn't totally bad, as far as animation and sound sync are concerned. The humor was sub-middle school, and the characters, while drawn alright and distinguished, left an empty feeling in me after watching this. Seeing as how you are 19, I would think that you would have a little more developed sense of humor than this, but maybe not.
Anyway, congratulations on making it on the front page with your first flash. I don't know why it is on the front, but maybe there was nothing else deserving? I'm not trying to bash you here, because your effort was obvious.
Just work on the humor, try to create something that will make an adult laugh as well as a 11 year old, and maybe the future of your "long-running" series will be a little brighter.
And don't go being immature and retaliate against my review just because I didn't give you a 10.
grim-studios responds:
You know, I'm sorry for all the bashing, but I tend to take constructive criticism more constructively than outright bashing. Thanks for giving me some helpful criticism on my series. I was just unloading on those poor bashers and I really shouldn't have let it out on all the others. Sorry to all of you who may have taken offense. It's just distressing to me when people totally knock down my cartoon without giving a good reason why.
The credits were better than the movie
I'm looking forward to a long running series of severely unfunny movies!
I can't believe you took a screenplay credit, there was an actual screenplay? If you spent more than five minutes on it, you need some serious help!
grim-studios responds:
I'm sorry you feel this way. :( I seriously thought this was funny. But, as I said before, it will be remedied later on.
Horrible
Graphics and sound and such were okay, but it wasnt the least bit funny. I doubt there are many 3 year olds watching who would find it amusing
grim-studios responds:
Thanks for the comment.