Greatzor!
Cant wait for the next toon, defiantly Fav.artist matrerial
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Reviews for "Spaced Out! (Pilot)"
grim-studios responds:
Hey, thanks! I have a fav!
Pretty good episode!
This series definitely has potential. And for some reason Captain Leader's voice skills remind me a bit of Fry from Futurama.
Just one TINY little suggestion, if I may... The series could use some tweaking in the humour department. Though the very end caught me completely off guard, and I guess that's what made it funny. :)
Anyway, back to my suggestion.. Sign gags. You've got quite a bit of 'em, I recommend building up on those sign gags. Kinda the way Megas XLR builds on it's humour with it's button gags.
But again, very nice series, nice animation. ^_^
grim-studios responds:
I know, i know. Just read the reviews before yours. LOL. And I'll build up on those sign gags, trust me.
Ignore this sign
Nice work. Gotta say Robo-Bob was my favorite. "I can't help myself from pumleing people" classic. The signs in the backgriund were also a nice touch. A very Impressive first flash. I reccomend you take BrandonPClark adivce though, he seemes to know what he's talking about. Can't wait til more come out!
grim-studios responds:
Hey, thanks! :)
Pretty good.
Sometimes it was boring but it had some funny jokes! Good for your first flash.
grim-studios responds:
Thanks. A lot of the harsh reviews don't take into account that this IS my first real Flash.
So Much Potential
Humor: Good but needs work.
Characters: Robo-Bob is hilarious and Captain Leader is pretty funny. Reminds me too much of Futurama.
Graphics: Good, but could be imrpoved.
Sound: The policemens' voice acting sux. everything else is good.
I'm giving this a three.
grim-studios responds:
Thanks, it looks a lot better for this next episode. And about the Futurama similarity everyone seems to be all caught up on, is it because Leader's voice sounds a little like Fry's? Because that's the only real big similarity... That and it's in space. Well, thanks for the comments!