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good idea for a series..... kinda like red dwarf or something? with the cat n all.. and the robot.... but robots are pretty common in sci-fi.... so i'll let that one go.
graphics were pretty good as was the animation.... humor let it down a bit... just needs worked upon. gj
Thanks. I know the humor needs work, but hopefully that will change with the next episode.
Good Potential
Excellent graphics. The opening really caugt my attention. However, it really wasn't that funny. Great idea, great graphics, but the jokes need work...a lot.
I'm sorry you didn't find it as funny as I thought it was... That will hopefully be remedied in the future, and thanks for your comments!
awesome
that was totally awesome dude. Must see more!!!
Danke!
this has potential
this basically seems like an original flash series that could be very good. i very much liked it. especially the fact that the wall signs changed their message every time the perspective changed. the characters were identifiable (i spell that right?). the captain leader dude is prolly like most losers with cars and a posse, (me) the cat is the paranoid person, and the robot is just funny. an ass, but funny. great job man.
Yep, you got pretty much what each character is right. And yes, you spelled identifiable correctly. :)
Much better than the second one you made
Still not great, everythings too slow and the jokes are just forced, stolen and generic.
You need a script writer.
Wow. I guess you CAN be constructive in your reviews. I do see the slow pacing. That's one thing I'm trying to fix in this next one. What I don't see are these stolen/generic jokes you're referring to.
(Are you talking about the "Bikini Inspector" bit? I guess that'd be one, but you say "jokes," as in plural. Where's another? Seriously. I want to know. PM me.)
I've learned a lot more about animation since 2A's completion, so watch the next one and see if it's any better.