Can't stop listening to it...
First off, I've been listening to this song on loop while we were screwing around on the IRC and I can'T stop it... it's really good.
Now here's for my review.
I love the smoothness of the whole piece. Especially the part around 1:20. It's strange the feeling I have while listening to it. It's a feeling of epicness yet it's sad AND hopeful too. It's like there's a whole story in this piece.
I'm never too technical in my reviews 'cause like you saw I'm not to prone on technic... But i'd like to say I really like your transition between the first and second part when you fade the percs. And like Chron say, your glitch in the end of the 2nd part is nice, but I'm not sure it has it'S place there... unless you had more through the song.
I wish the end was building up to something too... But the way it is is not bad either. I think that it leaves a feeling of continuation... like the story isn't over.
All in all... I love it. Good job... I'll be sure to check more of your work and review it.