This is Flash, Not an online book
I could barely read the font of that introduction, then you don't even have animation. From the look and Style of it and from the music i was expecting something grand... EPic even..
you dissapoint man...
Reviews for "The Renaissance Chapter 1"
That was different.
The whole story in a flash thing is a pretty novel idea, but perhaps the text should be a little easier to read to those who don't know what it says already. I'd suggest remaking this one with a bit more legible font before making the second chapter, if you indeed do make it.
not all that bad
could use some touching up thought. the music was apt and nice i thought. not too bad overall. hope to see more maybe.
Damn...
Well, my first complaint is the scrolling text, as I could read a single word of it (try a different font and colour, so it's more visable). Still, it seemed fairly promising, so I patiently sat throught the scrolling text only t find that there was no more!
Really, I was expecting some animation at least. The start seemed so grand at all, it was quite the anti-climax.
Judging by the small amount of Flash I witnessed, I'm sure you can do better tahn this.
Impossible to Read
While the story is quite cool, you really need to write it in a font that is easily readable, as it is near impossible to read the scrolling text