Meh, I've seen worse
Update the graphics a little, add at least somewhat of a plot, and you might actually make a pretty good flash in the future. Also, the replay button doesn't seem to work.
Reviews for "Halo Shorts #1"
Umm....
I can say it's "kinda" funny, but I have been blown up by a lot of these plasma grenades numerous times that it just ain't.
PS - Plasma grenades stick by melting through your armour and skin. To pull out a plasma grenade would mean pulling bits of melted metal and skin.
Advice - Make it unexpected to be funny. Like Grunts and Elites playing baseball where the plasma grenades are baseballs and the sword is a bat.
4.5
Making a Halo series is not all the original anymore, as the game has been out of a while and we have seen a lot Halo-related flash. Enough infact to last a lifetime. You have to be original, and just have a plot in general that is interesting and entertaining. Having a character fire a gun at some weird alien creature is just not enough. This was fairly short, with little action and no real plot. The characters could use some improvements, especially the alien creature - just way to simple and bland. in future shorts, possibly add more to the plot and have a more elaborate concept. Good luck in your future movies and the upcoming shorts.
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Fair.
Not too bad. Anyone who has ever played Halo knows how much it sucks to have a plasma grenade stick to them. I once stuck one to a Grunt's head and he yelled "Oh no! Not again." lol. Anyway it's not too bad but for a few things.
1. The replay button doesn't work.
2. You spelled this like THis.
3. Halo2 isn't spelled Halo(2).
Pretty good though. Just take some more time next time. Peace out:)
Not so great....
It's really short, even FOR a short. Plus it's sorta bland. The drawings are really cool though.....Meh..