Uh...
What do you want me to say? That was good?
Reviews for "Halo Shorts #1"
I'll give it a five.
Good stuff, good concept. However, some things I'd point out include the need for a standard level of graphics and animation. You have a lot of detail on the chief and on the gun, yet your plasma, explosions, and background are lacking. If you get all the elements to be on the same level, it'd look a whole lot better. On the animation part, you might want to make masterchief feel the recoil from the gun a bit more, throw some flashy light effects from the gun (like the chief's armor shining at certain parts when he fires), and consider making it look more like a war zone.
How'd this survive?
The grenade sucked, the animation sucked...You got pretty lucky.
I guess Halo lovers are abundant on NG...Make the next ones better, and maybe longer than 6 seconds?
Hm...
Not bad. Looked okay. I was interested... Not very entertaining, but not bad.
Not long enough, but a good concept
Make something out of it and it'll be good.
Good animation style and graphical style, but make him do something with a... what's the word? oh, I know... PLOT!