Great story and dialogue! Sumptuous sprites!
Nice work.
The graphics could have been cut better (they all have some unsightly white bits around them) and it would have been more enjoyable had you gotten someone to do the female voice, but it was still fairly enjoyable.
So that's where the 'doood, dood' penguins from that 'Punk-maker' or whatever it's called, came from? (You know, the one which allows you to place guitars and such to make music.) Ah.
First off, the opening scene looks lovely, but the font used (comic sans?) doesn't fit in well at all I feel.
In the intro, 'guards' is mispelt.
The narrator's castle comment about the castle amused.
From the moment the characters come on-screen, the white surrounding the character sprites do make it look rather sloppy.
All the voices are nicely acted and though the plot and dialogue seems rather nice and energetic. Some ideas are a little corny, but there's enough half-jokes to make it all really entertaining.
The ending should have a replay button, but apart from that, the lack of a female voice, the white parts round the characters and the font you use, this is nigh on perfect.
Had the plot been totally original, I would have given it a 7, an 8 if the voices had been all acted and the white bits removed.
As it is, I'll give you a 5. Everything else, I ignored the question of who created it.
I just can't tell how much of the story is yours. Was the dialogue taken word for word? How much is totally new? I know not these things.
I also find myself wondering - if I do watch this series (I watched this episode just to vote fairly on #3 btw) then would I enjoy the game less were I to ever play it?
Well, I suppose if it's good enough, I'll enjoy it anyway.
You're not going to reveal any surprises like characters dying and such, are you?
I hope not... :-/