Finish it?
I thought it was pretty great... until it ended rather prematurely.
Reviews for "A Modest Love Story"
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thanks for reviewing it. I don't really know what to say other than it felt pretty finished when I finished it... maybe..? :P
very nice
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ;)
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Yay! Thanks for reviewing my movie!
I felt two things while watching this...
The first was I knew this was going to be a great little Modest love story because of the simple few colored graphics and the fairly good music. The second thing was for some reason I thought this was going to end with the screen fading to black and having a bottle of perfume or a vial oc Calvin Kline crack, because of the simple few colored graphics and the good muted good music and then it would end with some sedductress whispering,"buy it...."But thank god you only did the first one. Moral of the story: cherish the time you have with the ones you care about before they go off alone while you are sleeping, develop a glowing red orb with a silhouetted couple on the inside, and then fade away in a ssnowman made of sand in front of a huge fan kind of fashion...this may seem far fetched but I think I hit the nail on the pretty salt covered head. yep...? 4 FO U!
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Wow, thanks for the lecture. ;) Just kidding, I'm glad you liked it.
lovely
Dude. falling angels, decomposing guy leaving before disapearing something for her to remember... This was touching. I really liked it.
Graphics(7): nice drawings, black and whites is always more intimate, Style (7): great idea and well performed, Sound (8): i love orbital, Humor (2): is not funny at all, but some one might find it funny, for the sake of those weak minded, i give it a 2
(this animation should be rated with at least a 4)
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thanks, awesome. You people rock. All these positive reviews (especially the ones that make sense) make me wonder if possibly I'm not wasting my life.
It's cute
I can sketch out a basic story line, where it look likes the girl was an angel to anwser the prayer it looks like a t frist, but then it seems like it was the exact oppistie. Your flash is good, beautiful. But the story is still fairly basic while beign slightly interesting, but i kinda lost my attention once. Good enough to have praise, bt not for a reward.
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Hmmm... well, I will think about your comments. I actually really like the story and the simplicity here.
I know that I may have personal feelings attached to this, and what was going on in my life is probably the reason why it's my favorite animation I've made. It's hard to imagine what it's like for another person to see it for the first time...
Anyway, thanks for the complements and the criticism. Thoughtful reviews like this are important for improvement.
Should I give the 'Daily 3rd Place' award back, do you think?
;)