omg.
I love the simplistic feeling of this flash, how the children are portrayed, and the overall plot! Nice job. :)
Reviews for "A Modest Love Story"
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Aw, thank you so much!
It's really nice to hear something sweet from someone who's work I look forward to seeing every time.
Keep submitting your awesome animations, you're going to go far. Armless Boy just totally blew me away. ^_^
You have a director's eye
Hey there, lovely piece of work here - you really have a great directorial eye (after just seein' this and tinman) and a solid stylistic understanding of where you are right now in your animation. Loved the piece, have you considered smoothing out the end of the music (at the end of the flash)? Minute difference that can give the viewers a much sounder closure on it - otherwise, loverly.
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thanks a lot, man!
Yeah, that (the music at the end) has been bothering me for awhile now, I think I had the volume on my monitor too low when I was working on this and now I would really like to get it corrected...
However, if I went into the old .fla file and started messing around to get the music smoothed out, I'd probably want to fix up a few other things as well (convert movie clips into graphics, smooth out some of the images, get a proper perloader in there, maybe add a play/pause/rewind control strip...) I think I'd wind up wasting days or weeks getting it to where I would like...
But since I'm really pretty busy with stuff right now I think I'd better not do it.
Hmmm.... Now I'm thinking about redoing the whole thing from the beginning when I have time... this is YOUR fault! Just kidding. ;)
Thanks for reviewing. ^_^
Very nice
Something about that Flash was great. Really great. I'm not sure what it was, but it sure was something. Great graphics and a nice choice of music with a real sweet animation. You made some one as cynical as me feel good. Thanks.
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thank YOU! I wouldn't be putting this stuff out there if people weren't giving me such wonderful feedback.
Awww
I loved it.
The colours were lovely, and i always enjoy white backgrounds with simple graphics, but you made a great job with the colours.
I liked a lot the simplicity, and how you just make a simple love story, not a complicated one, not a typicall one.
Great job :)
BlackmarketKraig responds:
:)
Thanks. I wish my life were simpler, being alive is just so complicated... Maybe that's why I made this. :D
Thanks for reviewing!
brilliant
i love your style.
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Awesome, thanks. :D