Reviews for Lifelines

[RenonUthZhakrin]

I`m not sure why O_o;

I`m not sure why, as was pointed a lot of the scenes where re-used, but I enjoyed this a great deal, an insane amount actually, the pacing was perfect- it got it`s point across without being over bearing. I hope to see more.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Well thank you! You are the only person that has ever put this on their favorites list! I'm also wondering why my movies are suddenly drawing traffic again, I mean I haven't submitted anything new since Evolution... :P Very peculiar if you ask me.

Thanks for reviewing! :D

[jim-bowies-shame]

Don't watch while operating heavy machinery.

I've never actually gone to sleep during a flash movie before. Thanks to you, I can now add that to my life experience. As tempting as it must be to recycle frames in a movie, try to mix things up a little more than having the eyes of the blue man pointing a different way every tiime. A real yawner.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Haha! The title of your review made me laugh. :D

I seem to have a real problem with pacing....

[ntalented]

Your animations are the greatest.

Your art and storylines is CRAZY and I like it. I can't wait for the sequel.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Eh... ok. Don't suck up so hard, alright? Did you really mean that or are you just trying to motivate me to work on your project?

Talk to you later. :P

[that-sucks-crumpets]

mysterious

i definately thought that the blue man killed the other guy so that he wouldnt die because the green dude didnt have the "you are gonna die" lifeline on his hand. a bit confusing, i think you will have to explain it more or make a sequel so people can understand why the blue man did that. nice job.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Thank you Ms... uh... crumpets.

I am planning on redoing this flash in order to (among other things) demystify the story a bit.

A pseudo sequel is also underway (more so than the redone original, actually). But that is a whole other thing with very little to do with this one.

[Geminate]

So...

This blue headed guy has a murderer's hands sewn on to him? Seems unfinished.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

So...
Um, the green yakking doofus guy is not a murderer, he's just some dip who had long lifelines (palmistry). He managed to not live a very long life (being killed with a crowbar and everything)... It's meant to be ironic. I guess it didn't land for you.

I guess if/when I update the thing I'll try to make it more clear.

Anyway, I appriciate your feedback and opinion.