very good
i loved teh intro, but then it had a bit of a transition problem to get to the start.
anyway, i thought it was a tad slow when you just watched the blue man sit there or green guy yaking. also, the yaks were way slow coming out wehn he talked fast, so that seemed a bit off.
hehe, that was a great story, you really got the feel for the char, it was so simple and so well done.
nice kick.
Thanks.
I really appriciate the thoughtful and constructive criticism so that I can improve this and futute flash projects. :)
You are good in my book.
ok but needs more work and more humor
work on it a little bit. You'l get better!
Thanks, aji92, if that is your real name...?
A little peppy encouragement can go a long way.
ahhh!!!
ahhh im in love with ur flash's!!!! i saw modest love story an like cottn05 had to check out ur other stuff an i love it....i love ur tim burton style characters and i love ur music choice...i saw orbital on modest love story..an now dr octogan on this....i love it :D plzzzz make more!!!
Thanks. I do plan on making more...
<3
I knew right away that the Modest Love Story charaters were Tim Burton-esque, but it hadn't occurred to me about this one until I read your comment.
Hmm....
Anyway thanks for reviewing it! And for the 10!
amazing
after seeing "A Modest Love Story" I HAD to see wot else you had done. You are absolutely amazing!
Oh no! You got your praise all over my clothes! EWWW! ;)
Thank you so much! You made my day.
Clever :)
Your submissions are truly art.
Thank you very much. You're making me blush.