That was pretty cool.
Do things like that and I look forward to seeing your next entries to newgrounds.
Reviews for "Lifelines"
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thanks for reviewing my movie. Double thanks for giving me a high score. I will try to keep putting things on Newgrounds due to the positive support that I've gotten so far. Thanks again.
very good
i loved teh intro, but then it had a bit of a transition problem to get to the start.
anyway, i thought it was a tad slow when you just watched the blue man sit there or green guy yaking. also, the yaks were way slow coming out wehn he talked fast, so that seemed a bit off.
hehe, that was a great story, you really got the feel for the char, it was so simple and so well done.
nice kick.
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thanks.
I really appriciate the thoughtful and constructive criticism so that I can improve this and futute flash projects. :)
You are good in my book.
well done
this is a pretty good animation... little confusing, but i relaly enjoyed the artistry. keep up the good work
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thank you for reviewing my movie. I am really surprised and pleased with the amount of positive feedback that I have gotten already. Also, thanks for such a great score and for your encouragement.
LOL
Life lines aren't always right are they? :P
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Thanks you for reviewing my movie! God, I hope life-lines aren't always right! I have sickeningly long ones and my best friend has impossibly short ones. Woe is us.
Thanks for giving my movie a wonderful score!
ummmmm
R....i....g....h....t
not your best but for your first submission pretty good.
but i really dont get it.
whatever guess everything is not supposed to be understood
BlackmarketKraig responds:
Well, yeah, a lot of people don't really understand what I was going for...
OK, in palmistry (the study of lines on ones palms to predict their fate etc.) a persons life line (the most prominant line running from the edge of your palm about halfway between the index finger and thumb and curving downward toward the wrist) is used to detrmine that persons quality of life. However, most people believe it is a way of determining how long they will live.
So the flash is meant to be ironic. As the blue man with short life lines kills the green yakking doofus who has rather long ones...
The town of Sedona (where I grew up and currently live) is a new age capital of sorts, and palmistry/astrology/psychic readings etc. are more common around here than in other places I guess.
Thanks for reviewing!