Eh...
This is great for your first. All I have to say is, look at some other things in judgement. The ones that have a stick tween. This is like 10 times better then those even though you only used tweens. I gave you a five for effort and wonderful drawings. Practice ways to actually get the character to move.
You have potential!
im shocked
That was pretty damn good, u make a few more flashes and ul be on the front page, most people do a crap stick fight but this had real direction.WELLDONE, obviously theres a lot to improve on bbut im sure u will pick up all the tricks soon,
pretty damn good.
I liked it, consideriing it's your first. try to add more full range movement in your charactors, and more speaking. Besides that I think you got the idea of scene structure and all that. Also don't feel like just because you have drawn it that it needs to be in the movie, it's ok to edit your work a little harder.
wow
Excellent job, man! ur movie totaly pwns my CS movies....GREAT JOB.
Great Job
It's definetally refreshing to see someone with talent make a good movie on their first try. Im sick of those losers who make shitty ass stick movies and expect them not to get blammed. You obviously put lots of work and it looks like you know what your doing so keep on making flash. I can definetally see you becoming one of Newgrounds top artists.