Hey, nice job.
Why doesn't this have a higher score? I loved this. It had a nice plot to it. For your first flash it's amazing. Any complaints would be that the 'motion' was sometimes a bit slow. You may want to increase the speed at which things move and such, like the Ts/CTs moving, just not too fast. Sometimes it just seems slowed down a bit.
Also, voice acting would help.
You should be at least in the mid 3s for this. Shame on people voting down on it because you said it was your first flash.