first? bs
ur first movie???? bull shit dude. i say this cuz its good. u must hav experienced flash b4 2 now about alpha and tweens and all that. i dont believe u downloaded flash, opened it up, and just made this movie. it wuz good...except try and get at least a little movement next time...all u did wuz move ppl around the screen...u didnt move them independently (arms, legs, etc)
NICE
you could of done better on the walking but that gets a good 5 out of 5
Wow if I could have a nickel for every long reveiw
I'd have one nickel!
I had many problems with this flash. The main one being the ploy and dialogue. You must have thought of the most vapid, bland, boring conversation ever!Since when does America have a special task force who own a hostage van(kinda random) but also endanger the mission by splitting up. And did they come through the roof by cutting it?! It was just painful to watch. Secondly, The character design was a little messy. The good guys had some eskimo parkas,like thats going to help them be stealthy. Plus the backgrounds were just so plain it took me right out. ANd if you supply voice for the team then why not the terrorist phone call or the breifing. Plus what dumb fuck terrorist holds eleven hostages, asks for 1.5 billion, and lets them be able to trace the call?! Well good luck with this and good luck writing shitty dialogue for a shittier action flick coming soon to theaters in 2006
too much negative comments .. oh well, if it's bad, then i guess it's bad.
Omfg, Horrible
That was just horrible animation, And what the hell was with those guys just standing in front of each other shooting but no one dies....Then the other guy comes in and kills them both.....HORRIBLE
Ways to improve- MAKE MEN MOVE No one likes flat images moving across a screen
TAKE SOME TUTORIALS
SPEND MORE TIME ON DETAIL AND REALISM
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I didnt like the rap at the begining.. (i hate rap) otherwise decent job.