Could be alot better
I'll condense what I've watched from this whole series into one review. The series is, simply, not what it could be. If in the hands of a REAL artist this sries could be good. Im glad to see you've tightened the dialogue, it's not so corny evne if it's ever so vaguely better. The graphics, are utter crap, I see no improvement without the whole series. You should really attempt some drawing tutorials because this is awful. It needs voicework, what I saw in the first few was surprisingly decent actually. Now,a compliment. I like your style, your directing is actually quite well choreographed. But the overall lack of talent you posess in illustrating and animating just brings down what could be a great series.
Hoensty hurts, doesnt it?