Hmmm
There was certainly some effort put into it... I guess...
awww XXX it ! There was hardly any animation , no story line , no original voices and the entire movie made absolutely NO sense atall. It's wasn't even funny! Senseless + funny = good, Senseless + downright peice of crap BORING = pathetic!
Go back to the drawing board! for a long ... LONG time.
The beginning looked promising...
but ended up short on delivery. I know this wasnt intended, but I have to rate what i see. Sorry.
Just keep working on it
Ok, some sound advice, but never release anything unless its finished. Too many people complain about sound problems and how they have to cut them short. Well if there is a problem then don't send it in. No one wants to see an unfinished accident that doesn't make any sense. I hate to rag on ya, but in any professional or commercial place, if you tell them that there was a problem and you just had to turn in what you have, which isn't that good, they'd laugh at you, thus that should apply here at NG too. You need to work on your sound editing skills too. The night time bug sounds were looped badly to the point that it annoyed me. Just make sure next time you finish your work and turn in a full movie, =)
Don't worry, I plan to work for atleast a week on Episode 2, thus, perfecting it.
And yes, there are some bugs, but hey, I just started movie making, I usually make games.
this seemed good....
before i pressed play
it didnt make sense. especially that blood loss crap. the guy died then it just stopped for a bit. make it longer and clearer
follow this one rule
if you feel you need to apologize for your video, dont submit it in the first place! put actual work into it, and THEN show it to us.
I apologized for a GLITCH, not the video itself.
And it's not going to be blammed, so it must be worth submitting, no?