It's okay
You could have done a great movie...But instead, you made some random person die. The begining was great, but then it turned to shit. Work harder, pal.
Reviews for "Atomica"
Yes, it is short
After seeing the slick helicopter and gun images, the rest looks really ugly. If you're gonna have a style there, pick one and run with it. It looks too out of place as it is. Your voice-over is too low, as well. There isn't really enough to say about the story, so we'll just have to see.
Pros: tough to say...story could be interesting
Cons: different art styles look really odd, low sound
Suggestions: Settle on one look and do it. Interested to see if you can turn this into something good.
Diki responds:
I was going to go back and tune everything up, but then the sound glitch pissed me off, so I just ended the movie and submitted.
Hmmm
I wouldn't have actually bothered reviewing this, except I wanted to get that spammer's "review" off the front of this one. Anyway....
It looked interesting, but yeah - incredibly unfinished. I can't really fairly review it until you actually get around to finishing it. I don't really think anyone can.
ok......
this is kind of weird but i would like to see the rest of it as well.
Well...
Hmm..Good flash, I see were you tried to sorta make it like a resident evil thing.(or did you?) You just need to work on problems, work on you'r drawing,Sound,And story.It looked like it would shape up to be good. Just mabye add a intro expalining what was going on and what bit him, what they were affter, and why they had guns. Over all, ill rate it a 3.
-Hobo