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Reviews for "Atomica"

Just keep working on it

Ok, some sound advice, but never release anything unless its finished. Too many people complain about sound problems and how they have to cut them short. Well if there is a problem then don't send it in. No one wants to see an unfinished accident that doesn't make any sense. I hate to rag on ya, but in any professional or commercial place, if you tell them that there was a problem and you just had to turn in what you have, which isn't that good, they'd laugh at you, thus that should apply here at NG too. You need to work on your sound editing skills too. The night time bug sounds were looped badly to the point that it annoyed me. Just make sure next time you finish your work and turn in a full movie, =)

Diki responds:

Don't worry, I plan to work for atleast a week on Episode 2, thus, perfecting it.
And yes, there are some bugs, but hey, I just started movie making, I usually make games.

follow this one rule

if you feel you need to apologize for your video, dont submit it in the first place! put actual work into it, and THEN show it to us.

Diki responds:

I apologized for a GLITCH, not the video itself.
And it's not going to be blammed, so it must be worth submitting, no?

The beginning looked promising...

but ended up short on delivery. I know this wasnt intended, but I have to rate what i see. Sorry.

Yes, it is short

After seeing the slick helicopter and gun images, the rest looks really ugly. If you're gonna have a style there, pick one and run with it. It looks too out of place as it is. Your voice-over is too low, as well. There isn't really enough to say about the story, so we'll just have to see.

Pros: tough to say...story could be interesting

Cons: different art styles look really odd, low sound

Suggestions: Settle on one look and do it. Interested to see if you can turn this into something good.

Diki responds:

I was going to go back and tune everything up, but then the sound glitch pissed me off, so I just ended the movie and submitted.

Wow I like how the drawings looked they where neat

Hope part two will be good like this one!