Not Bad
Not too shabby, you needed to clear up the sound a bit and work on you people looks,some of them looked kinda weird,but other than that it was a fairly good idea.i guess you like that game huh? as long as you continue it without copying the game it should pass.
Nothing to do wiht the game....
Anyway, thanks a lot for the review.
practice makes perfect
the storyline was very good, the music fit the peice excellently, and i thought it was cool over all. however i think you need to work on your drawing to become really good at making flash. also in the last scene, the guy was most certainly holding the gun wrong, oh well. i look forward to seeing more stuff by you.
Thanks man! I've been working on my drawings for almost 2 years, and it gets frustrating just "working" on it, so I aim to put out as much content as possible in the next 6 months to improve practically.
And I see what you mean about the gun thing.... if anyone asks, it was a magic gun! :P - haha, you're observant though!
interesting
1.) good try man takes some guts to put up a new animation and what not on new grounds.. some people are pretty harsh... you guns weren't bad i could tell they were traced but they still looked cool the p90 was a bit big but other then that.. its ok
2) just work on your moving animation like walking you seem pretty new in the movement department, but keep it up.. it will come and just keep trying
LOL! I noticed how gigantic the P90 looked when replaying it before I submitted it - but thought "nyegh screw it, it looks cool, hehe"!
As for the animation - I did kinda rush this project on a little bit -it was laying unfinished in my Flash folder for a good while, so I wanted to get it up on NG before my exams kick in...
but my walking animation never is superb at the moment anyway, so that's no excuse!
Thanks a lot
Good
Needs work,mostly on the graphics and the length. It needs to have a storyline and have more enemys. So overall good but lots of work to do.
It was aighty
I mean i love violence, but the graphics and animation weren't that great. I can see if this is your first attempt at a movie, it's very good. I did like your P90 except for the fact that it was way to big for the guy weilding it. It was pretty good.