Reviews for The Hitman...

[Lacynth40]

A 1 for effort, however minimal...

Are you ten years old? Who did the artwork, a blind monkey?! I don't care if it does or doesn't resemble the game "Hitman"... That just plain sucked. Another thing, how did the hitman sit in the passengers seat of a moving care, and then get out of the driver side with no driver? What club owners (Taking a stab at some form of plot here...) come equipped with that kind of weaponry? I've been to a lot of clubs before, and I've never seen someone pull out some killing hardware as big as their chest... And how did the hitman push the dead man into the door, and then have time to get to his car, pull out a sniper rifle, and shoot it when it took club owner a better part of the flash to get behind the friggen bar... Just shody work, man... Try again, try harder. Put some effort into it, and find a friend that can draw, if you have some friends left after this piece of crap.

BazzMann responds:

First point about the car - very smart, I never noticed that one myself.

Eveything else you said was complete bollocks. Don't ever watch another one of my movies, until you go through at least a year of school.

[steveblade88]

interesting

1.) good try man takes some guts to put up a new animation and what not on new grounds.. some people are pretty harsh... you guns weren't bad i could tell they were traced but they still looked cool the p90 was a bit big but other then that.. its ok
2) just work on your moving animation like walking you seem pretty new in the movement department, but keep it up.. it will come and just keep trying

BazzMann responds:

LOL! I noticed how gigantic the P90 looked when replaying it before I submitted it - but thought "nyegh screw it, it looks cool, hehe"!

As for the animation - I did kinda rush this project on a little bit -it was laying unfinished in my Flash folder for a good while, so I wanted to get it up on NG before my exams kick in...

but my walking animation never is superb at the moment anyway, so that's no excuse!

Thanks a lot

[Baefild]

practice makes perfect

the storyline was very good, the music fit the peice excellently, and i thought it was cool over all. however i think you need to work on your drawing to become really good at making flash. also in the last scene, the guy was most certainly holding the gun wrong, oh well. i look forward to seeing more stuff by you.

BazzMann responds:

Thanks man! I've been working on my drawings for almost 2 years, and it gets frustrating just "working" on it, so I aim to put out as much content as possible in the next 6 months to improve practically.

And I see what you mean about the gun thing.... if anyone asks, it was a magic gun! :P - haha, you're observant though!

[CS-Tadnyk]

SNIPERS DONT HAVE LOCK ONS IDIOT

seriously, what the fuck was that, what did i just witness, and how the hell did that get a rating of over 1

BazzMann responds:

How many people have you sniped out in real life, Captian Dick-fiddler?

Maybe they don't - but this is a movie made by someone with a decent imagination. And anyway, have you not heard of the new lazer-guided sniper rifles being developed and readied to sell a year or two from now? No... didn't think so.

For those that actually are interested and have a brain capacity above this tossers... they work by little wind "flaps" on the bullet that change slightly in angles to manouver it by at least a whole metre in evey direction at a distance fired from about 500metres...

If you knew this, maybe you could drop the "smartass" act. But saying that, I didn't erally think of that when I made this movie - I just made a movie.

[MattLJ]

Hmm....

This is actually a tough one to review. For starters, your drawings are pretty bad, but the animation is very, very nice. Me likey Deftones, but you forgot to give them credit (on the left side of the screen under your name) :/
Just work on the drawings and you'll be one kickass NG artist.

BazzMann responds:

Thanks a lot, at least you put thought into your review, unlike a few others... anyway!

Erm, yeah, the drawings I think are "ok", I wouldn't say what you said, about them being "pretty bad", and yes I am biased since I've been working for a couple of years *desperately trying* to improve on them... however it's your opinion, and I'm always trying to improve my animation/drawing skills anyway!

Thanks again for the review!