what the site
its good real good and what the site?
Reviews for "Edge - Part 1"
Confuzzled responds:
site? I dont know if you mean *Typo Cartoons or Edge so heres both of them:
Edge: http://www.boxart.darkskate.com//Edge/
*Typo: http://www.boxart.darkskate.com//typocartoon/Index.htm
Good potential!
You definitely captured the personality of most fantasy rpg games. Although it was fairly lengthy time-wise, it needed a little more content. I'm sure if you finished the story into a series, it would be great overall, but remember that people are judging this flash on its own as an individual episode (not that they have choice, next parts aren't finished). You need a little bit more action to keep people impressed.
Overall, you did good and you have potential. Make the next parts.
Confuzzled responds:
thanx, i'm hopeing to have a battle or 2 in part 2, i cant wait to make it now, ppl seem to live it! ^_^
not bad
nice story line so far....pretty new to newgrounds if i say so.....cant wait to see part 2, but kethlars lines, his last line you can't read, it just breezes past it. Just letting you know..keep it up
Confuzzled responds:
damn I thought I had fixed that, sorry about that it said 'run Rigger, you just make it simpler' I'll fix that soon
You have potential!
I liked the story so far. I think this could become a really good series! And your style is good, too!
My only complaint is that it was a bit short. I would've liked to see more.
Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next part!
Confuzzled responds:
yes sorry about the lengh, i just realised that if i made this really long and it didnt make it onto Newgrounds I'd have wasted my time so I thought I'd 'test the water' to see if it will do well, the next one will be longer
Nice
Your backgrounds are ok, but need to have more detail. They look like they are 1D. If you could make them look at least 2D that would help alot. I like the style you use in this. I am going to make sure to watch parts 2 and 3. Good stuff here.
Your author comments make me laugh.
Confuzzled responds:
well glad you like the comments ^_^ nice to know someone reads them. Sadly as I have said before I cancled part 4 as I felt the series was becoming too much for me with a mix of people exspecting a sertent level or quality (although in my view not high) and I felt in the rush to get parts made I had messed up the original plot :-(