You have potential!
I liked the story so far. I think this could become a really good series! And your style is good, too!
My only complaint is that it was a bit short. I would've liked to see more.
Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next part!
Reviews for "Edge - Part 1"
Confuzzled responds:
yes sorry about the lengh, i just realised that if i made this really long and it didnt make it onto Newgrounds I'd have wasted my time so I thought I'd 'test the water' to see if it will do well, the next one will be longer
Good
Good stuff.
Confuzzled responds:
thanx
Cool
Hey that was really cool. I cant wait to see part two. Keep it up dude!
Confuzzled responds:
Thanx, started work on the story for part 2 now
((( NICE STYLE )))
This flash was decent and has good style like with the art and music, maybe abit to short but still good, my only real problem wa sthe "TEXT-BUBBLES" while its cool to have subtitles, it slows down the movie feel of the flash, i would suggest make it sow you dont have to click to go to the next one, just let it flow on through like a movie, anyways good movie even that ending hehe...
~X~
Not bad.
Work a little on your graphics. Voices would be nice. The sword on his back looked a little awkward. Too vertical.
Typos I noticed... Banishes-Banished Makeing-Making.
Confuzzled responds:
ah sorry about the typos >_<