Reviews for Edge - Part 1

[crisisdreams]

awesome style

I really love your style. The whole Overworld setting was designed really well, from how happy and colorful it was to how the characters fit in with it well. Can't wait to see how you design Edge and Underworld.

Like others said, it's pretty short. Very nicely done in what little time it had though. :) Oh, and I know this sounds really picky but the grammar in the introduction kind of hurt. ^^** Nothing bad, just needs some spellchecking. (hole = whole, too = to, banishes = banished) This is no big deal, but weird grammar sometimes gives bad first impressions. They're probably just careless typos.

Yay, can't wait for part 2. Keep it up! :)

Confuzzled responds:

LOL glad to see another happy chappy (or chappet). Sorry about the typos (kinda lives up to the web sites name thoe!) some of them WERE typos but some I must admit are because I spell as well as a fish with no fins, I used a spell checker but it dosent check grammer or anything >_<. Also sorry about the lengh of it the next 1 will be longer, If you (or anyone whos reading this reply) wants to help with the story join the Edge RP Forum (if you like to Role Play) and if i join in ur RP (as Rigger) I might use what happened in a cartoon!

[Zefiris22]

what the site

its good real good and what the site?

Confuzzled responds:

site? I dont know if you mean *Typo Cartoons or Edge so heres both of them:

Edge: http://www.boxart.darkskate.com//Edge/

*Typo: http://www.boxart.darkskate.com//typocartoon/Index.htm

[mike24567]

ya its good

good stuff

Confuzzled responds:

Thanx ^_^

[exfuga]

Good

Good stuff.

Confuzzled responds:

thanx

[Gussa]

make part two

make several parts of this movie and eventually have the sword guy kill all the evil and also have the eye patch guy be the real leak ( i really liked this movie and the style of it and its originallity)

Confuzzled responds:

Well I got a twist for whats gonna happen to Kethler but that will come later, also i dunno how long this is gonna b (might b 7 parts, might b 50) but whne this saga ends i'm gonna start following osmeone form Underland so that sould b cool (thats far off thoe!)